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The element I admire the most would have to be the word choice and the imagery. The author made me feel like I was actually there and I could almost smell the lemon scented cleaning spray.
I just wanted to know what happened at the end. Just what was under that floorboard. That is one of the most irritating yet amazing ways to end a piece. With a cliff hanger. I think the author did a wonderful job of writing this piece as well as ending it.