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This poem really makes me think about today and the society we listen to. I was left feeling aware of everything this poem had to offer and what it had to say.
I understand what the author is trying to say. I don't think the author needs to fix anything, language-wise.
My favorite line is, "I miss the good old days," because I really do miss the good old days. The days where I didn't have to worry about what I looked like and how I acted. Those were the days where the only thing people cared about was playing with friends.
This poem is really good and moving. I loved reading it and I felt as if I could relate to this. Not only can I relate, but many other teens might be able to relate as well,
Keep up the good work.