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Any critiques are welcomed and greatly appreciated!
It's about a girl whose mother named her after a lighthouse. Even though she and her mother begin to drift apart, they are eventually drawn together again before the mother dies. At the end, it turns out that the girl was a lighthouse in ways she didn't expect.
The way it tied back to the first part at the end. That was done very well.
This piece needs some moving around. It feels a bit disjointed in places, and I hope I've pointed those out to you as best I could.
I'm a fairly harsh reviewer, but I did like this piece. There's no shame in having a draft that needs redoing. This could be a very good piece, provided that you revise it.