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I liked how vulnerable yet relateable this poem was. I think the raw desire for a crush is something that so many teens feel. It was nice to see the emotions in writing.
I think if you started with a stanza about why you love them, it could add another layer to the piece. Obviously, it is meant to be about your behaviors, but adding a part about theirs would enrich the story.
Great job! I really liked this piece.