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This piece reminds me so much of myself, it's crazy! And the poem is amazing! You're such a talented writer!
The imagery is amazing! The different kinds of figurative language is also very impressive! You used intelligent wording, instead of words like, 'Good' or 'Ok'.
No way! I love this piece just the way it is!
All i can say is, keep up the fabulous work! You have a whole lot of talent! I can't wait to read more!