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Message to Readers
This is for amohn04's #tellastory contest as well as for KiwiCat's contest. Go check them out!
Feedback is greatly appreciated. I don't mind harsh criticism at all, so be brutally honest.
I loved that plot twist!
I'd like to know more about these characters...how long have they been in space? What's happening on Earth? And so on.
This is a really great piece. I didn't have a lot to criticize here. You did a great job with all the mechanics of writing. Maybe deepening both these characters would lead to more writing ideas. Good job and keep writing!