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Message to Readers
I wrote this recently and no I'm not depressed at least not anymore. I used my past experience of my battles with depression and this is the end result. Many people ask "What's depression feel like?" and this is my way of answering that question. So let me know how you feel about this poem and what's your opinion on it.
I really liked the way that you put friends and family in quotation marks. It really captures the feelings of abandonment and unbelonging that someone who is depressed with experience.
This question is always really hard for me too answer because I only read pieces that seem to interest me and I only review pieces that I liked to show appreciation. Really this is perfect. My best friend was depressed and this poem just reminded me of the thoughts she would share with me. Maybe add something about what brought you into the light. Maybe playing the guitar, laying in the grass, walking through the woods, petting your rabbit. That would add a appreciation for something that helped you through your time of hurt. I know when my BFF was depressed One Direction was her go to happiness. Besides me :)
I really like the last line. Honestly you could make that a writing prompt for a short story!