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The topic of Brussels. When I was told about the bombings yesterday, it tore me apart. I hope that people read your piece so that that can be brought to their attention.
Your argument is strong and effective.
That you chose a topic that has affected so many people around the world, and that you have incorporated having world violence not a solution to our problems.
No, I think it's amazing!
The structure is strong and your words are personal and true.
Thank you for writing this! It was beautiful that you had the courage to write this, as so many do not. Thank you for expressing your opinion and doing a great, non-threatening way of it! You're an fantastic writer and person!
Inspirational and true.