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This poem is literally about me. I'm a farm girl wanting to go to a fantasy world myself, so I can totally relate to this piece! I wish I could bring all my livestock to Hogwarts, Narnia, etc!
You might want to add more to your second stanza, which is shorter than the others. Is she thinking of anything else besides the fairy ball? Or anything specifically at the ball she's looking forward to? Great detail on her farm animals, as well as her dream.
Loved this piece! Keep writing!