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This is my first essay on Write The World, so please consider giving me further feedback. Thanks!
It lets me know that he is not copying other people's work and claim that the work is originally by him. But, he gives the reader a further source to research on their own about the topic.
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Thank you for your peer review on my diary entry 13!!!!!