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very poetic! the writer manages to present a genuine five-step end-a-bad-day process with pretty language, while avoiding being flowery. that is a hard line to walk, and you do it well in this piece.
No additional details. Again I'd like to ask if it's a routine you actually follow, particularly step 2, which I found fascinating. Step 3 is also beautiful in how basic it is. I'll emphasize again your language when I talk about step 5; it was poetic in particular and provides the reader with a feeling of closure, much as I imagine it would if I were actually following the five steps!
4 out of 5. Unique and pretty. Where am I likely to find another way to end a hard day quite like this one? I liked it a lot and I am looking forward to reading more by you.