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Message to Readers
Is my message clear? Do you think I should add something more or take something away? Also, do you relate?
Personal experience and slight argumentation keep me reading.
The main argument is that, yes, there are problems with social media, but they have always been there, just being incorporated in a new way that older generations don't understand.
I like the information given out.
I don't think that there is anything missing from this piece.
This is really good, and I hope that you do well in this prompt's competition.
<3 keep writing.