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I know I could use better wording and phrasing, but I was just trying to be raw and write whatever came out.
The story was... I don't know how to describe it. It was heart-breaking that those things happened to you. You felt sad, your boyfriend broke up with you, just... I am happy that you are better now. This is one of the best palpable pieces I have ever read. Your experiences you have just shared with everyone on Write the World is so sensitive and exposed. It can help future users who is suffering. Ultimately, great job!
Has your sister recovered from depression? Do you still get the symptoms every once and awhile?
You are a talented writer! I am very glad that I reviewed this!