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I am a Hunger Games fan, and thought that this piece was a realistic description of the Hunger Games. The way it is written made it much more interesting and exciting to read than a normal summary. Certain death is suggested, and that adds to the intrigue of this piece.
You should add a line that says may the odds be ever in your favor. :) You could also go more in depth on the things that happen like the interviews, parade, and training, if you wanted to. Maybe include what happens if you win?
Great job, hope this helps, and keep writing!