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Message to Readers
So yesterday I discovered a film program happening over the sumer. I REALLY want to get in, but I have to get accepted and get the scholarship for it first. These are the essays I had to write for it and they are ridiculously important to me. So if you could review this piece I would be forever grateful!! Thanks so much! :)
I feel that this piece was very well written. I think that it really told a story about the author and showed us just how much they want to be in this film program.
Honestly, I don't see anything. This was well explained and really well done.
I mentioned a couple of things in comments, but overall, these essays should stand out. I really hope you get in this program so you can chase your dreams! Good luck! Let us know what happens!