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I wrote this for ADM's contest (yay!) and it is based on the Apollo from the Percy Jackson series, always full of pride and loves himself, basically. This poem is a lot better than his poetry, however, which is to die for (quite literally). Hope you enjoy :)
I loved the way you used imagery and contrast to really paint this portrait of Apollo! You did a really good job!
I would like to know something about Leto. She's the only relative of Apollo who's never given more than a line of description.
Wow, this was a good poem! You can really feel Apollo's personality through this (especially the version of him that appears in Percy Jackson). Your figurative language is great, especially when you use symbolism and metaphors.