Peer Review by bride124 (United States)

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Life

By: Tony.


FREE WRITING

People say that friendship is forever, but those people loose them every day,
People say that happiness is everlasting, but those people have no families or friends.
People say Love grows, but they are the ones that never found it.
Life sucks, but it will get better.


Message to Readers

I’m just experimenting


Peer Review

The title seemed very broad and simple that I wanted to check it out.


How will life get better. Any elaborations would have been great after the ending.


Reviewer Comments

Good work!