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Message to Readers
When you get flashes of something that gives you nostalgia but you can't remember what it was- you can't identify the smell, you can't remember where you heard the song before, you know the face but not the name.
"It'e the melody you cannot place-" I think that's something that everyone struggles with. The fact that you opened your piece with it is great!!
Just a kind of calm, I guess. It's a short and sweet piece, about something that everyone goes through.
What made you write about it? I hope its not because you ended up forgetting something...
I really like your piece!! It's short and sweet!! I feel like the line about waking up in tears takes a slightly dark tone, and it would be nice if you could have another stanza just before the end, talking about things like that...I l really loved your piece though!