Peer Review by Vannah (United States)

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Shattered

By: AbigailSauble


FREE WRITING

Dusk falls across the horizon
Causing stars to dust the sky.
And I lie awake and wonder
If they symbolize my shattered heart.


Peer Review

I really love the vibe it has. The astrological imagery makes it feel pretty.


I think it would be really cool as a longer poem, yet the shortness makes it so dainty and bite sized. Like a dangling thought that you get to chew on in your own brain.


Reviewer Comments

This is beautiful. Keep it up!