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Message to Readers
I wrote this for a friend.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated!
I really liked how the color of her changed based on her interactions with him and the idea of a girl made of glass is such a beautiful image.
I was kinda confused about the whole "living in a glass house thing", it kinda gave me sci-fi vibes and if that wasn't what you were going for... sorry