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I liked how personal this piece felt. I really felt how important family and traditions are in it. Great job!
You show how food is an art, a skill that gets passed down from one generation to another. Food helps bind people together so that they have something in common.
I would have liked to know why so many people moved. Was there any particular reason?
It was a great hook! I love it when a sentence has antonyms in it. I might just refer back to it near the end and maybe clarify how you broke tradition and kept it alive.
This was a really great read! I loved the message the little details you added to create a picture in my head. Amazing work!
I like to read my papers out loud to help create a better flow in the sentences. That might be helpful for you, I don't know :) Keep writing! You have a talent for it.