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I really like the way there was a flashback embedded!
They make it 'more than food' because they talk about the significance of the food and how it is important in their family and culture
I feel like everything has a good amount of description/detail and nothing needs to be expanded on. I am not left with any questions :)
Yes, because you want to know what the girl is talking about and what is causing such a stir in their cafeteria
Your work is very good, the only thing I could possibly say would be to try and use more complex vocabulary. Other than that it is a really good piece of writing
It was really interesting to learn about the cuisine of another culture, I actually googled what grape leaves looked like! It was also very interesting to hear about how your family is clearly very different to mine!!