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I admire how much you talk about your family and the food that you eat with them.
You explain the process of making these grape leaves with your family and how big your family is. So, you covered tradition, culture, and family in this piece. I feel like maybe you could add a little whisper of holidays and a little bit of history.
I feel like you could expand in the areas of your holiday celebrations and the history behind the tradition. I feel like that is also an area you could expand on; tradition.
The beginning of the piece was what drew me in. It's amazing how you wrote a little story at the beginning and from there the piece practically wrote itself.
This piece is already very strong. Other than expanding in a few places, I think you have it pretty much made. Make it a habit of writing every day, even if it's a small amount. Writing every day can increase your writing because it's all practice.