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I really liked the idea of mermaids being more fish-like and the more being so teritorial and protective of her babies. It was really sweet.
How did Iris's mom know about the mermaids?
This was a lovely short story. You had a few grammar mistakes but everyone has those. You also tend to write really long sentences (don't worry I did too) but the more you write the easier it will be for you to know when to end a sentence. Well done!