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I don't think I can select one part of this letter, to yourself, that really moved me. The last sentence was the icing on the cake. The whole piece moved me because it is a letter to yourself. I have done the same myself many times. Years later I read it and I am in awe in what my younger self had to say to the present version of me. I want you to do the same thing. Write little letters to yourself and wait till you get older and read them.
I want to know what moved you to write this to yourself. If you did start writing letters to yourself before you shared this with other writers, I want to know what made you start writing to yourself. Did someone give you that advice? Or did you simply start writing letters to yourself on your own? I would really love to know.
This was beautiful. Sometimes the best and most beautiful pieces are the ones written during sad and painful times. Those are the pieces that will move eyes to tears and cause hearts to ache.
You, my friend, will be an amazing writer.