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Great title choices, good hook sentence.
The author supports a compromise on the issue of abortion by proposing an abortion period of 3 months.
There's kind of a logical, objective tone that helps persuade the reader.
Some areas are lacking explanation. For example, why is it "uncivilized to end it's life" once the heart stops beating?
Pretty good structure, paragraphs 3 and 4 are a little repetitive.
Action Contraction is the funniest.