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Hey guys! Haven't posted in awhile. I hope some people can relate to this statement. I've really been feeling this way a lot lately. I'm hoping that time will run it's course and somehow I will make the right choices. Anyway, happy writing!
The analogy of your situation to that of a fledgling in a nest not merely a poetic, but also a truly apt one to describe how you (and many others your age) feel. By using such a metaphor, I feel you make it easy for anybody of any age or walk of life to understand how you feel. That is a powerful tool in any writing.
This is clearly a deeply personal confession, and I feel touched that you were so brave as to share it with everybody. I do not think you need to deepen any ideas, as you are, of course, free to tell only as much or as little as you feel ready to. But I do want you to know that I feel somehow proud of you for being so honest. Openness, paired with eloquence in one's self-expression (as described above), is truly a rare gift.
Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts so candidly. I am sure there are many more young writers out there than you suspect who can relate exactly to this confession. You are a skillful writer with lots of heart. Stay strong and keep writing!