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I'd like to hear ideas on how to make the character appear panicky at the beginning and calm down soon, while keeping the lines limited to the thoughts of a single second.
Written By: Bananasaurus
May 7, 2019
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Love the tension and suspense!
Awesome! To make the character sound more panicked you could end their thoughts with "?!" instead of just a question mark? For example "I wonder if I can defuse this in time?!"
This is so good! To make it feel a little more panicky in the beginning you could try breaking up the sentences into shorter, choppier ones. Still––this is great.
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