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I really like the concept! Humans always seem to think that we are superior and the only important creatures in the Universe. You really challenged that idea!
Your puntcuation is iffy at parts, making it hard for the reader to read. I suggest some specific places that you can change it Also, I was wondering if you may be able to expand? Maybe focus in on the other creatures more. Of course, I'm not sure if you have a word limit or not so, if there is, ignore what I just said
Overall, nice job!