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Message to Readers
This piece is very out there, in a good way. It tells the readers that we could achieve new things
What was the oringal meaning for this poem to be written? Why did you decide to write it?
This is a very good piece and I like it very much. It’s very descriptive and I belive you could really make it somewhere with your writing!