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Be sure to check out part one first!
The cliches between the title and the text. You truly emphasizes the Land of Lost things, making these characters have their voices or even their souls embedded in the search/rummaging of the terrain.
How much chapters are you thinking of making? Do you want me to review Chapter 3?
This is a pretty good piece! 10/10! Hopefully this becomes a published novel!