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Message to Readers

EVERYONE DID AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

#SciFi CONTEST RESULTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

April 30, 2019

FREE WRITING

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First of all I wanted to start this out by saying everyone did great!!!! 
I was so impressed and entertained by everyone's writing! 

Without further ado, lets get to the places!!!

1st Place: Orfag - Ryder
https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/110439/version/210253
I loved this piece and the immense detail you put into this planet!! 
Favorite Sentence or two: 
The red moon rose slowly over the horizon, shedding crimson light on the solid rock ground. I wondered if there was water anywhere on this planet.  
I feel like as the first sentence, you did a great job explaining the planet! 
1st- Follow, three reviews of your choice & a shoutout- 30 likes  

2nd Place: Leyilo -A Breath into Silence 
https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/110727/version/211395
I loved how you described everything, from languages to different tribes!!
Favorite Sentence or two: 
The young girl who was sitting with the stranger when he woke was called Ndelaèilìlomon [stars-in-the-endless-void], but everybody called her Níela [star]. She was of the Yila tribe, carrying their distinctively blue skin and wide endless eyes. 
I loved the creativity you put into these names and how you decided what they meant! I also loved how you described the alien and the difference in tribe appearences
2nd- Follow, one review of your choice, one of my choice, shoutout - 20 likes 

3rd Place: אלמוות העולם הנשכח - Dmoral13
https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/110011/version/212504
I loved how you formatted this, it was very creative!! 
Favorite sentence or two:
Due to your destruction upon our spacecraft we believe this to be a declaration of war. 
This sentence was particularly suspenseful!! It advanced the plot of this letter further!!
3rd- Follow, one review of my choice shoutout - 15 likes 

Honorable Mention: Cl@ss1fied D@tA -Blotted Ink with a Broken Quill
https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/110629/version/210594
I loved how you organized this, I loved the @ for the a's and the 3's for the e's. The format was very creative!! (DONT BE DECEIVED- honorable mention means you were the entree that sparked my interest ;)    ) 
Favorite sentence or two: C0pp3r; g3@rs; 345˚degrees 
You described the temperature and etc with a creative new way (that's probably never been done ;)  ) 
Honorable Mention- follow, shoutout. - 15


Everyone did so good here and it was hard to put these amazing descriptive stories into ranks!! Thank you so much for entering and if you are in 1st, 2nd 3rd or HM please lemme know which pieces you want a shoutout and like on ;) Thank you and have a good day!! 
(also please be good sports, y'all all did amazing and I don't want anyone to be upset - ;) )
 

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3 Comments
  • A Breath Into Silence

    Wow! I had a lot of fun writing 'Leyilo' - I think I'll continue it on here! Thank you for doing this contest :) And congrats to everybody who placed!

    For my one review.... could you do 'Lora'?


    about 2 months ago
  • Dmoral13

    Thanks for the amazing contest!!! Loved it!! And I'm so glad you liked my piece


    about 2 months ago
  • Ryder

    Oh, Thank you! I had to do a double take when I saw my name :) I would like a review on The Forest Scholar......can you pick the other two? :D:D
    Congrats everybody!


    about 2 months ago