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I love how complex the language is. As a reader, it feels like dripping honey. There is elegance and lavishness to the words, and yet the poem is still sensical. I can feel the emotion through the intricate descriptions.
There are always stakes when one writes, because to write is to bare one's sole. I think that whenever someone is brave enough to offer up a piece of their soul, their thoughts, in the form of poetry, it has an impact. It sparks empathy and inspiration, and it encourages the reader to write.
I want to know if there has been a change. If you are able to voice this to the internet, have you been able to voice it to the person?
The authenticity and delicacy of your poetry is lovely to read. Keep writing because you have something to say, something that we can all relate to.
AMAZING! I really liked this piece