asteria

United States of America

don't settle for the mundane;

chaos is far more intriguing.

Message to Readers

existential crisis, anyone?

enjoy, my loves

headphones and vanilla sugar perfume

April 30, 2019

FREE WRITING

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I HAVE
            NO
                    W  O  R  D  S  .

and
they
know.

they
always
know.


i
    am
            hopeless.


and
the silence
                    the silence
                                        the silence

oh
it kills me.


if nobody hears,
do i even exist?
 
~asteria

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6 Comments

  • r|A|i|N

    oof relatable


    6 months ago

  • asteria

    @Pointless-Person-Parker, i'm touched that my piece hit so deep for you, and that your unique reading of it made it all the more meaningful. thank you for taking the time to comment :)


    7 months ago

  • TeabagWritings

    I really like the unique title :)


    7 months ago

  • Pointless-Person-Parker

    My favorite part of this is the
    "Oh
    It kills me"
    Part because I skipped over that the first time I read it. Then I saw it and I was like, okay, wow, feeling kind of deep there. I like how I didn't notice that, I'll admit. I don't want that to be changed because it gives you this kind of second whoa feeling. While it would usually make me unhappy that I missed something, I'm glad I did. It's a really good piece, and it feels weirdly unplanned but thoughtful.


    7 months ago

  • asteria

    thank you!


    7 months ago

  • Vannah

    I love the last line, it's so poetic and can be a metaphor for so much


    7 months ago