asteria
United States
don't settle for the mundane;
chaos is far more intriguing.
Message to Readers
existential crisis, anyone?
enjoy, my loves
United States
don't settle for the mundane;
chaos is far more intriguing.
existential crisis, anyone?
enjoy, my loves
6 Comments
r|A|i|N
oof relatable
asteria
@Pointless-Person-Parker, i'm touched that my piece hit so deep for you, and that your unique reading of it made it all the more meaningful. thank you for taking the time to comment :)
TeabagWritings
I really like the unique title :)
Pointless-Person-Parker
My favorite part of this is the
"Oh
It kills me"
Part because I skipped over that the first time I read it. Then I saw it and I was like, okay, wow, feeling kind of deep there. I like how I didn't notice that, I'll admit. I don't want that to be changed because it gives you this kind of second whoa feeling. While it would usually make me unhappy that I missed something, I'm glad I did. It's a really good piece, and it feels weirdly unplanned but thoughtful.
asteria
thank you!
Vannah
I love the last line, it's so poetic and can be a metaphor for so much