don't settle for the mundane;
chaos is far more intriguing.
existential crisis, anyone?
enjoy, my loves
Written By: asteria
April 30, 2019
Login to Write a Review
Login or Signup to provide a comment.
@Pointless-Person-Parker, i'm touched that my piece hit so deep for you, and that your unique reading of it made it all the more meaningful. thank you for taking the time to comment :)
I really like the unique title :)
My favorite part of this is the
It kills me"
Part because I skipped over that the first time I read it. Then I saw it and I was like, okay, wow, feeling kind of deep there. I like how I didn't notice that, I'll admit. I don't want that to be changed because it gives you this kind of second whoa feeling. While it would usually make me unhappy that I missed something, I'm glad I did. It's a really good piece, and it feels weirdly unplanned but thoughtful.
I love the last line, it's so poetic and can be a metaphor for so much
Need more help?