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Message to Readers
How would you make it stronger?
The context in which you detailed dreams and hopes that you fulfilled in the future is actually freaking beautiful.
I would want to know what else you’d have to say to your future self. I love it, and I need more!!!!!
Your username, your bio, and your work are awesome. I’m really glad to have had the privilege of reading this. I hope to read more of your work.