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Message to Readers
This is my final draft, but I would still very much appreciate any feedback! :)
I love the idea of the signs being noticed by regular people, because although climate change is hard to believe, if you pay attention, you'll see it. Also I looooved the metaphors and you describe everything so well! Beautiful sentence structure (which I'm not gonna lie, is rare on here.)
This piece urges you to look around and see what warning signs you notice. They may not be as large as dust clouds, but things such as higher allergy counts, hotter summers, random weather changes, etc, are all earth's messangers. Not just for those living in disaster struck areas.
I wanted to know a little more about the specifics of the floods, maybe what the news or other people were saying about them , or if they were in the news at all.
Obviously this is your final draft, and you don't have to edit it anymore, but who knows? It may become the basis for another essay, or intro, or you might want to revise anyway! I loved it :)