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The numbers act as a catalyst for the tale, they are useful but really they just add that one detail that finishes the story
There isn't really a paragraph that you could add to. The 'One' paragraph is a lot shorter than the rest apart from zero, but I interpret that as almost a metaphor of insanity that I get the feeling of from the protagonist, and I really like that!
You have an absolutely amazing way of writing. Everything from the title to the grammar and punctuation heightens the story and the entire piece is 'polished' because it isn' polished if you know what I mean.