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Message to Readers
Yes, I see now my few grammatical errors
The title is incredible. This seems like a statement has once said or thought of in the back of their mind. I have always wanted to fly. Have you?
What happened to Ariel? What is the hag's name? (This seems a bit irrelevant, but just wondering) Is there a sequel?
You have a lot of talent. Despite all of my minor critiques, since you asked. I am going to tell you why everybody like this piece.
With a great display of setting and characteristics of the protagonist, the visual and sensory details are outstanding with great character development in such a short time. Although the timeline may not be super long, you gave us readers a remarkable plot that we will never forget.
Keep on writing!