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plz plz plz plz plz let me know what you think
i have long slaved over this piece and would love some comments!
this piece moved me so much, even though i wasn't expecting it to. it is a perfect melancholy, sudden story that captures the teenage boy's feelings perfectly.
although this story doesn't give any details about what happened to the father, that is the beauty of it. this was perfectly written. seriously. the vagueness of the happening, coupled with the over detailed description of "unnecessary" details captures the story perfectly.
wow wow wow wow wow i love this story so much. one of my all time favorite pieces on this website.