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Message to Readers
Updated version of my Creative Nonfiction. Let me know what you think!
I love the imagery you use. You use a wide variety of words that make the piece come alive.
You bring attention to the fact that we are the ones at risk from global warming, not just the earth.
I would like to know what organizations are working to combat climate change and how I could support them.
You have a gift for description. Keep bringing important issues alive for people!
Try and be a little more forceful with your emotions. Help the reader feel what you are feeling.