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Message to Readers
Updated version of my Creative Nonfiction. Let me know what you think!
I love the descriptive writing. The way that you describe the winter--or the spring that you were wishing for--was just beautiful. We could feel the emotions along with you. Beautifully done.
I love that this is personal. YOU are the one being affected. It makes the piece more personal. <3
The actual flooding. I loved the build up--but would've liked a like more tension.
It was wonderful though! What a talented writer.
You are absolutely amazing! I love the way you write--we're smiling with you, hoping with you. We feel your anger, and then, ultimately, your determination. You have such talent. Keep it up!
Beautiful! Keep it up! Good luck.