Abi Pinner

United Kingdom

what, You egg?
[stabs him.]

Message to Readers

How is this structured? I don't have a clue, that my friend is up to you.

Hmmm

April 21, 2019

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I have created, a great many things. 

Constructed this life
from 
all this; 
Every Sensation 
         Conversation 
Life long Friend
Built. 
All atop my own foundation. 

As though my
every breath was
produced by my own lungs,
every thought my own mind. 

At last, when, 
my earth was shaken, 
all I construct can also be felled. 
Yet grounded I remain, 
and the ground work has been lain. 
In 
this 

exist. 

Building Skyward, 
crumbling consructions...

but I can create a great many things and perhaps it is time to dig deep instead.  
I wanted to mess around with structure please do forgive the terrible wordplay. 

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2 Comments
  • r|A|i|N

    I LOVE YOUR BIO THANK YOU FOR AGKNOWLEDGING THE GREATEST QUOTE ON EARTH


    over 1 year ago
  • rainandsonder

    i quite enjoyed reading you mess around with structure. i love particularly how smoothly this flows, the way each line slips easily without any bumps or awkward halt, and that last line, "perhaps it is time to dig deep instead." fantastic work!


    over 1 year ago