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It's about a person's reaction to a suicide in the family/of a friend.
The moving description and emotions.
I couldn't really tell who each of the people were.
This is really vivid. It left me feeling a lot of different emotions. You really did a great job capturing it. I don't know whether to tell you that I liked it or to tell you that I'm sorry it happened.