Peer Review by bride124 (United States)

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#escapril who am i?

By: Christy Wisdom


FREE WRITING

without my name
i am

i am the one
who smiles easily
laughs often

i am she who 
dances and sings
with the music

and creates it
occasionally

i conjure words and 
twist ink to form 
tales of butterfly-wings and 
dragon-flames

i have many friends and 
relatives
some by blood
some are my 
brothers and sisters
in Christ
some are both

i am she who may be
remembered
who will probably be
forgotten
by many more

but i am a girl who 
hopes
that she at least 
impacts
the world
somehow

whether her group of
loved ones
or on a bigger level
she isn't very picky


so who am i 
without my name?

i am me.
 


Peer Review

Everything! This is a super creative piece!


Nothing. I was truly entrance in the writing!


Reviewer Comments

Great work!