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rainandsonder

United States

musica est vita

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this is one of the few poems i've written that actually rhymes, and i'm not sure if i've totally got the hang of it. please leave a comment or a review!

pear a dice

July 22, 2019

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in a fracturing world where the trees
howl anthems and cut up the sky;
where the night is neon lights and
the marshmallow stars are shy;
where thrashing drums paint the air red
and weeping guitars throttle blue veins;
where the sun blushes the sky and
bleeds shadows like raindrop chains;
i'd lay in this land of sound and
poetry and flower wreaths,
and find euphoria in strings of
words the world shudders beneath.



 
alternatively titled: "rhymezone is my best friend"
idk about the title (i'm just not good at naming things in general; it feels like too much power), but other than that i don't think this turned out too horribly. this used to be called "a happy place" for the #escapril thing, but this revised version is fairly different from the original. if you enjoyed, please leave a comment or a review; comments are super helpful to writers because likes don't let us know what you thought or if you really read it! and as always, i'm totally open to constructive criticism.

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  • Anha

    love this! it's short but sweet, and "the sun blushes the sky and / bleeds shadows like raindrop chains" has so much impact to me, idk but this is amazing


    about 1 month ago