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Mason's diary entry 1 by Mason Wong

By: mason wong


Dear Diary

Today is a good day, because I did well on my milestones and also have a good day at school. I just hope tomorrow it will be the same, and I will have another good day.

Mason Wong

Peer Review

I'm also a possessor of a diary, so I found this a bit intriguing to read someone else's diary entry.

Well, what else made you day a 'good day?" Do you always have "good days" or is achieving milestones and having a good day something rare?

Reviewer Comments

Never stop writing! :)