Christy Wisdom

United States of America

Hello people! What to say? I'm a Christian girl. I like to write. I write tons of poetry, some short stories, and other things.
I like
NARUTO
Imagine Dragons
LOTR
Harry Potter
Agents of SHIELD
Artemis Fowl
My Hero Academia
God bless you!

Message from Writer

There is no happiness like that of being loved by your fellow-creatures, and feeling that your presence is an addition to their comfort. - Jane Eyre

Not all those who wander are lost. - Lord of the Rings

I have come home at last! This is my real country! I belong here. This is the land I have been looking for all my life, though I never knew it till now. -C.S. Lewis, The Last Battle

Things to know about me
1. I'm a Christian.
2. I'm Pro-life.
3. I do not put any swearing (oh my gosh included) into any of my stories.
4. I will not put any sex or nudity into my stories.
Thank you to all who have supported me, and feedback is always welcome!
Also, if you comment on a piece of mine, I will generally respond to it at some point.

chocolate sky

April 18, 2019

FREE WRITING

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she had chocolate eyes.
it was a fact, though-
her eyes really looked sky blue.

honestly, it baffled all who saw it
this phenomenon
two colors, two shades
both metaphorical,
only the blue was literal.

her eyes were of chocolate
because they were always sweet
and held an affection and a cheerfulness
that was addictive.

everyone just wanted to be 
around her
to be friends with the one
that could bring even the slightest 
tinge
of sugar
to the bitterest moments. 

sometimes she herself wore that
dark aftertaste 
in the pools of blue
but it was nothing more than that-
only a memory,
soon to be replaced with 
lighter feelings. 


but her eyes were as the sky-
they were bright,
shining of light and freedom. 
they held sunshine within their
blue depths 

and when the clouds came,
they were always chased away 
quickly

for no thundercloud
could stand to
cover up 
those sky eyes
for long. 

and so her eyes were of
chocolate,
yet as blue and as carefree
as the sky. 

 

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5 Comments
  • Christy Wisdom

    Thank you!


    8 months ago
  • KittyTheCheshireCat

    I really like this, I'll review it as soon as I can! :)


    8 months ago
  • Christy Wisdom

    Thanks so much!!


    8 months ago
  • bride124

    Great work!


    8 months ago
  • WritingDragon

    This is really cool, it makes me think of a story where this character has already overcome the darkness around her and learned to deal with it and has become this sweet person everyone admires, but the darkness still comes for other people and she knows this and is there to try and help them learn to gain what she has. But they can't they can only see that she is different and appreciate it.
    Super cool! Good Job!


    8 months ago