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This whole poem exudes a deep feeling of anger and vindictiveness, which both work so well in conveying the strength and intensity in the voice of the speaker. After reading, I am left stunned and in awe at the speaker's piercing, commanding power.
I think you already gave interesting, sharp lines that effectively allow readers to understand and feel the emotion of the speaker. I also love how the speaker's intense emotion is juxtaposed with the lower-case formatting of the poem, a very smart way to focus all the attention of the readers to what the emotion that the poem is communicating.
The line "so predictable i could lipsync to your falsehoods" strongly conveys the speaker's disdain and familiarity with the falsehoods of the person she/he is talking to.
All in all, this poem is on point. It is a stunning monologue presented in a strong, commanding voice that effectively conveys the speaker's emotions.
I am looking forward to reading your other works! Good luck in the competition!