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this poem is so relatable and it takes the reader on a roller coaster of sorts, going through tumultous insecurities and ending with self-acceptance
i think that you could utilize more metaphors, sensory detail would be nice but i'm not sure where you would add it.
"I stuck two fingers down my throat and gagged on/foreign food and the family that I came from." it's such a vivid line that hits very hard. it's shocking, and that's what makes it so powerful.
welllll the deadline passed like a week ago but that doesn't mean you should stop drafting or whatever! editing is always a good thing to do when you don't feel like actually writing. you're doing great so far!
keep writing! this was a really meaningful read and i'm glad i discovered this piece