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journal entry on environmental conditions that are potentially harmful to person by mason wong

April 15, 2019


Air contamination is one type of environmental condition that is potentially harmful. It could be harmful to a person, because when you breath in the polluted air the air go into your nose and into your lung. Also, when the air is polluted could your damage your lung. Which could let to lung cancer, asthma, COPD ( Chronic obstructive pulmonary diseases), cardiovascular problem. For instance, like heart attack, stroke. But, there are systems in place or methods in place to help prevent pollution from the air damaging your lung. The ways you could help minimize air pollution is conserving energy, carpooling, use public transportation, bike, walk when the situation is tolerable.
    There is many more way you could use to minimize air pollution. The ways are following gasoline refill instructions for efficient vapor recovery. These could help decreased air pollution, which decreased your risk of having those diseases listed above. But, don’t burn trash or leaves could help minimize air pollution too. I don’t think you want to breathe those carbon dioxide right or carbon -mixode, which is more deadly. I hope no one would want to breathe that polluted air.
    Water pollution is another type of environmental conditions that are likely to be harmful. It could or likely to be harmful to human because when you drink polluted water it goes into your body and causes you to be sick. Polluted water could cause typhoid fever, cholera, and Diarrhea or even food poisoning if you use the contaminated water for cooking. Which could be deadly if not treated in time. You might ask then what are ways we could prevent or minimize water pollution?
    We could prevent water pollution or decrease it by not bathing or washing clothes at river or lakes or ponds, not disposing household waste into sources of water, and sewage should be cleaned or clarify before disposing it into rivers or lakes. Then, if you decreased water pollution be sick because of it. So, I hope you guys have a great day and not be sick, because of pollution.

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  • mason wong

    Do you know where I messed up my Grammer

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  • Harlow

    Cool essay! Your grammar kinda off, but the message is really empowering

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